Like we discussed in class you need a different image: Will does not fit the genre of your magazine. This looks better than it did but I would say you need some more cover lines - perhaps in a different font as I'm not convinced that the font you have used for the cover lines fits the genre.
I understand you comments about the text, i think the text looks right in the banner at the bottom but i will play around with the text for the cover lines!
Like we discussed in class you need a different image: Will does not fit the genre of your magazine. This looks better than it did but I would say you need some more cover lines - perhaps in a different font as I'm not convinced that the font you have used for the cover lines fits the genre.
ReplyDeleteI understand you comments about the text, i think the text looks right in the banner at the bottom but i will play around with the text for the cover lines!
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